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Our unconditional love

My long denied dreams 
Met with realism 
when Your love superseded all the miseries of life  
Oh ! My  lover artist 
Paint your  love with Your divine kiss ;
the  purest eternal bliss

 You heel my heart  
With your gentle art !
I am your sweetest  muse  
Our thirst for each other 
Makes us go crazy !

the two extreme world 
Cannot deprive us  our love ! 
So we are born with a common fate
 an unconditional love  against the time
I wish to spend my life 
in your great strong arms 
Far from the country life 
Deep into the rustic charms !

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  1. Date: 5/29/2011 2:21:00 AM
    wow! and i bet it felt good... sometimes one never knows how it feel to fall .. one is never for sure when a dream has been awaken.. sometimes love does not feels the way it should... it feels way better than expected,... enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 6:54:00 PM
    Happiness has returned to your face :)

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    Date: 5/28/2011 2:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I Will never let it go any where now !
  1. Date: 5/27/2011 5:07:00 PM
    Very passionate write.Pl check for typo in the 1st line of 2nd stanza.(heel ----it should be heal)........

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 3:54:00 PM
    Smriti Beautiful just beautiful , wonderful words of love .Anne

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 3:03:00 PM
    superceded heal too other than that it was beautiful