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Our Meeting - Nighttime Musings

in flight my thoughts dreaming, I wander to view she, whom has captured to see her my heart flutters on arriving my eyes see chatting we now walk soon amidst our wanderings hungered moments flow hotel door now closed, we're close eight thousand miles diminished

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Date: 12/22/2015 7:36:00 PM
Great write, James, good luck in the contest what stays behind doors stay behind doors:)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/26/2015 9:58:00 AM
Hiya Eve, indeed :) Wishing you a belated Festive Season and a healthy 2016 ~~ hugs ~~ James xx
Date: 12/19/2015 9:49:00 AM
My pleasure James.
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Date: 12/17/2015 9:11:00 AM
I met my wife in Mexico, she was from Vancouver and I was from Ontario. In n three days I knew she was the one and I moved to Vancouver. It is 23 yrs later and I could not be happier. I wish you well and enjoyed your poem very much.
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James Fraser
Date: 12/19/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thank you kindly Richard for sharing a little part of you, very nice of you, and thank you so much for your lovely wishes. Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas ~~ Olive and I...
Date: 12/16/2015 1:20:00 PM
Long distance relationships have to be hard..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 12/16/2015 1:23:00 PM
We're blessed Sara, for it's working for us for 2016 isn't far away for us to be united ~~ James ~~ :)
Date: 12/15/2015 7:05:00 AM
Huge James, i'll never forget that time.. =`) months passed but when i remember it, it seems its just yesterday... =`) tight hugs=`) xxx~Olive Eloisa =`)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/19/2015 9:18:00 AM
Seeing you at Ninoy melted my heart even more little one. Next time you'll be sitting beside me on the flight to our new lives. So many prayers and thanks to say to Father God for our paths to cross. Hugs of many from your Huge One ~~xx~~xx~~
Date: 12/12/2015 3:35:00 PM
Such a wonderful love story you and Olive share James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/19/2015 9:12:00 AM
Afternoon Jan, trying to catch up on commenting. Thank you kindly as always for you kind comments ~~ hugs ~~ James :)

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