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Our Love, Within Four Walls

I want to be alone with you within four walls We could make our love story within these walls We could share our love with lots of feelings without no one knowing our inner secret My heart is aching for your love and want our dreams to turn into reality within these walls Your kisses could make me passionate and we could enjoy the art of love making Your hugs can bring our hearts closer and we could be happy with our love within these walls We could love each other for many years within these walls But our love will be spring for ever within these walls These walls could hear our voice and watch at us But it keeps all the secrets within these four walls. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka Copyright @ 2004 – Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 8/27/2012 5:45:00 AM
A lovely poem Ravi - Much love and it becomes even more when we have someone to share it with. They say, "we can live long on air and love"!! oxox hug Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/28/2012 10:38:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Appreciated
Date: 8/26/2012 10:49:00 PM
Hmm.True.Sometimes the world dont understand the feel.Very romantic but wish the love could flow out too.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/26/2012 10:51:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Mad Hu. Appreciated.

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