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Our Romance Will Live On

I'll bring the matches, You ignite the fire, Burn the biggest branches, As our bodies start to perspire. I'll lay out the blanket, You can catch our star, Pull me inside your planet, I'll follow wherever you are. I'll turn off the lights, While you emit the moon, And feel our bodies collide, This desirable night in June. Our romance will live on, devotion, For there are no words to convey, The depth of our intense emotions, The passion we vividly portray. Date Written: October 20, 2015 Contest: Love Poem Sponsor: Alexis Y.

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Date: 12/17/2015 12:42:00 PM
LAURA, wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/17/2015 3:02:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/15/2015 3:42:00 PM
Laura, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/16/2015 10:39:00 AM
Many thanks Alexis:) Grateful you enjoyed it :)*smiles*
Date: 12/11/2015 9:18:00 AM
The setting and the mood of this poem lends itself well to the subject matter of young love and the commitment of lives and souls to each other's happiness. The words fall from the page and collect gently within the heart. Emile.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/11/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thank you dear Emile..:) very kind of you...*smiles*
Date: 12/10/2015 1:27:00 PM
Hi, Laura...very nice.. I hope this love is still going strong.. you can use that blanket when it's cold. ;)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2015 1:33:00 PM
awww young love; everlasting.. so sweet.
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/10/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thank you sweet Lin...It is going very strong :) 20 years this January, and I'm only 35:) High school sweethearts :) Stay blessed Lovely lady Lin...:) -*smiles*
Date: 12/9/2015 9:42:00 PM
Very romantic... I'll have to check out the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/10/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Tim!! :) -luloo

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