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Only Me

I stare out a blurry window and dream...
With squinting eyes I see past self esteem...

I press my lips on the glass and speak...
Muffled words and distant sounds barely leak...

Water drips faster down this chilled scene...
With the image of a faded smile slowly seen...

My hands wipe the coated vision that I see...
To the reflection in a mirror of only me...

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 2:34:00 AM
    This is very nice Michael,,,,I read Don Johnson's poem for you. Had to come see what inspired him ;} You have a blessed Christmas, great poem ;}

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:35:00 AM
    Very clever poem..reading between the lines of the reflection which is and the reflection you see..Well penned Michael.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 12:54:00 PM
    This is nice. You know - when you stand by the window and you are alone All kinds of thoughts can come to your mind. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 10:14:00 AM
    I feel like I am almost standing beside you and looking out the window feeling the moisture on my hand and seeing my reflection in the pane. Love this poem for you can feel the words. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:24:00 AM
    Wow!!! this is truelyy a powerful write. You are a great poet my dear Michael. blessings to you?

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:11:00 AM
    Powerful write here, quite deep and insightful too. Very good poem penned and many thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:41:00 PM
    a broad sense of vision in this poem Michael luv .. have missed your thoughts and innermost desires .. JG getting it together after a busy week luv .. sharing your dreams too ..xoxo

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:54:00 PM
    Excellent in all its ways Michael. Reading poetry inspire me so much. It is a way to share feeling and understand other people feeling. It has given me so much joy to visit your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Perfect reflection, well thats according to me. I enjoy these introspective writes of yours MJF: they are sometimes empowering. Hope your week is a great one. Love CTH ;)

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:27:00 AM
    A reflection of you reflecting....interesting! Very well done Michael - Shaz

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:23:00 PM
    Very nice Michael!

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    Date: 11/26/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your freaken me out man, what a scarey photo lol. When I get insomnia this is the face that keeps me awake. Chucky has nothing on you buddy.
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:32:00 PM
    Hey hey Michael, today I took the time to read your poem, Great poem I liked it! hug from me Laila

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:29:00 AM
    Wow!! superb write my friend Michael..I like it..thanks for sharing and for dropping by on my poem. Have a blessed day always!! Hugs, Maria :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:45:00 AM
    Excellent, my friend! A very haunting piece... cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:02:00 AM
    Fantastic good poem Michael! Have a pleasant and nice new week! ..... only me - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 11:58:00 PM
    Very nice image painted here. Wonderful. (thanks for commenting on my tanka)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:22:00 PM
    Wow, what a deep in intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this poem full of depth and lovely words this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:21:00 PM
    Love the squinting eyes.. sad thoughts, and feelings,,, Michael, you are great when it comes to images,,, not only can we visual them,,, we can actually feel them too... always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:41:00 PM
    So few words capturing so much emotions. The mark of a skilled writer. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:28:00 PM
    Beautiful verses Michael, I can pictured it clearly :)- Hug, Yanny