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One-Up-Put-Downs

monchielle stanza One-up-put-downs are nails: What hubby puts up with he usually puts down. “Your lattice-lace curtains make our windows look like clowns.” One-up-put-downs are nails: I remind him of lights - Christmas lights on windows put up in November. “It’s March now, lights must go.” One-up-put-downs are nails: The star on the garage has shone for three full years. Awaiting some wise man with ladder to appear. One-up-put-downs are nails: Wedding pics hung in place, may come down due to strife which hangs in the balance between husband and wife. written February 28, 2016

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Date: 9/12/2020 12:02:00 PM
This is real, Reason! The push - pull of a marital relationship! I pray the wedding pictures stay up! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/13/2020 6:43:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, it’s hard but oh so worth it.
Date: 5/6/2016 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your work being in Andrea's favs' list andon the winners' page..Sara
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Date: 5/1/2016 6:59:00 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:29:00 PM
lovely the impact of the repeated phrase congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/29/2016 4:01:00 PM
REason, this is EXCELLENT writing on that topic of up and down. I really enjoyed this clever piece. FAVE
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Date: 3/1/2016 11:48:00 AM
thank you, Andrea, I welcome your comment and of course, the time it took to read and write a reply.

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