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One Thing I Ask of You, Is That You Save My Heart

we both know it wont stop untill you do it; you need to and you want to; be cold be ruthless be bold express slice me limb from limb its what i deserve fill my despair to the brim hack my every nerve make each cut as painful as possible: you need to and you want to; each torch and stab each scorch and jab cut each bit till all thats left are useless slabs of meat neither of us will be bereft until then you wont be complete one thing i ask of you is that you save my heart keep it as good as new smiling face as we depart

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Date: 12/3/2009 4:01:00 PM
Very powerful, to endure so much pain and gore and only ask for your heart to be saved. Wonderful write and thank you for your kind comment.
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Date: 12/3/2009 2:48:00 PM
Can you smile if you depart,,can you save your heart if you go away when you love her still this much,, i bet your lady loves you just as much,, i dont think she would stab you.. i think she would want to hug you,, i would if the man i loved would say such words.. i would hug him.. and i think that heart in the title would mean so much to her..many emotions stirred indeed-Charma
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