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One of Viscera

one of viscera bearer of every passion becomes victim of......... heart makes life live on gives highest contribution till dies to the end

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Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:40:00 PM

I like both haiku. The verse in reverse.. ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2014 11:03:00 PM

your pen is of passion.BL.. very deep ending..Linda

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/2/2013 9:46:00 AM

thought provoking bl xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/1/2013 11:15:00 PM

My friend this is a thought provoking HaiKu very well expressed!

Skat A

Date: 5/1/2013 2:55:00 PM

wow! That's what I call LIFE! love the way we have to live one~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

Interesting Haiku that you have written to share with us..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always welcome..Sara