One More Night

One More Night Please stay with me one more night. I don't want you to leave me. The night is very cold. Please give me your warmth. Stay just this night, I won't ask for more. Put a bow on this night and make it a gift. Tomorrow you can go, before the sun comes out. It will still be dark but you can leave. You will place a kiss on my forehead and you will say goodbye. You will think that I'm asleep. I will already have left before you - only you didn't see me go. My body will be there and my soul will see you go. I wish for you the best in your travels throughout this life. I will always be greatful for you spending with me the last of my nights...
02/10/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/12/2013 8:42:00 PM
Well I hope this will not be the last night? Come on...Stay another couple nights. :o)
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Date: 2/12/2013 12:42:00 PM
Wow! How touching! I like this poem and its theme Lucilla. Thanks for stopping by and your comments on my poem Suicide Bomber. Beleive me their gain is only hell. -Mohammad
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:05:00 PM
This is a beautiful and amazing write my friend! I am truly delighted by the inspiration that this poem expresses! You have painted a brilliant piece, one that I will hold with me in my dreams! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:36:00 PM
A business trip.
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:27:00 AM
If he is smart enough he will stay for where else will he find a better place? Lovely romantic and tender writing!
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Date: 2/11/2013 7:00:00 AM
Yearning for closeness and love - Really touching and romantic, Lucilla. - Thank you. - Hope your week will be beautiful and good. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/10/2013 11:31:00 PM
wow, lucilla, this one is very emotive and touching. I really enjoyed it!!
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