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Senryu- One Last Breath

and one last death gasp a son said with a sad sigh- life is a moment ___________________________ January 10, 2016 Poetry/Senryu/one last breath Copyright Protected, ID 16-743-256-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Syllables of Wisdom, sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2016 9:37:00 PM

Broken, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**

Constance La France
Date: 1/26/2016 6:25:00 AM

Linda, you are so welcome, grateful for your visits to my poetry ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 9:26:00 PM

BROKEN, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2016 3:20:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for the congratulations, appreciate !

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/15/2016 1:04:00 PM

An enlightened and touching write BW. Congrats on a fine write and win! Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 4:31:00 PM

Cecilia, thanks so much for the nice comment and congratulations, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2016 7:09:00 PM

very well deserved win, and Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 8:11:00 PM

Andrea, thanks so much for the congratulations, appreciate ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2016 2:56:00 PM

So sad and so true, BW. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 5:37:00 PM

Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations and the hugs !

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/13/2016 5:36:00 AM

Hi BW. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:39:00 AM

Teddy, thanks for the congrats, appreciate !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/13/2016 12:07:00 AM

Wise n emotive words broken.. big congrats on first place win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:40:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the visit and the congrats !

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2016 12:06:00 AM

BROKEN, Congratulations on your awesome. HUGS --- Skat

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:41:00 AM

Skat thanks for the awesome, the hugs and the congratulations !

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/12/2016 11:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:42:00 AM

Susan, thanks so much for the congratulations, appreciate !

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2016 11:20:00 PM

Broken Wing, love the picture and the poem congratulations on your win dear friend

Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:42:00 AM

Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment !

Lu Loo

Date: 1/12/2016 7:54:00 PM

Wow, captivating and moving Broken Wings...:)

Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 8:24:00 PM

Laura, oh thanks so much for the wow and the captivating, appreciated ~

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/12/2016 4:32:00 PM

Moving comment on the brevity of life! Congratulations on your win. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 5:09:00 PM

Janice, thanks for visiting and the congratulations ~

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/12/2016 4:32:00 PM

Moving comment on the brevity of life! Congratulations on your win. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 5:10:00 PM

Thank you Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 1/12/2016 3:45:00 PM

very sad but beautiful Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 5:10:00 PM

Jan, thanks for the beautiful and for the congratulations, so appreciated ~

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/12/2016 4:01:00 AM

Oh to have that moment happen at a mother's time is indeed the most painful moment... A searing thought in your lines, constance. Best wishes! :-)

Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 8:47:00 AM

Kim. thanks so much for visiting and for the comment, appreciate ~

Thomas Martin

Date: 1/11/2016 12:09:00 PM

lovely but sad memorial!

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2016 2:48:00 PM

Thomas, yes sadly beautiful but that is life

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/11/2016 2:07:00 AM

Wise words my dear, but so beautiful and touchy , best of luck in the contest, hugs / / :) dalia

Constance La France
Date: 1/11/2016 9:43:00 AM

Dalia, thanks for the visit and the beautiful and the hugs!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2016 7:17:00 PM

saddest one, Broken Wings!! Hands down. and one to savor.

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 10:53:00 PM

Andrea, yes it is so sad, inspired by the death of one of my patients today ~

Jill Spagnola

Date: 1/10/2016 4:26:00 PM

Breathe taking Constance!!

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 10:56:00 PM

Jill, I love that word breathtaking, and what was breathtaking for me today was to watch a son give his father permission to die, with so much love in his heart, my job as palliative care nurse is full of deep sadness and beauty and I am not there just for the dying but for the living as well ~

White Sage

Date: 1/10/2016 1:56:00 PM

excellent write BW, though its sad...you wrote it well, best of luck in the contest

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 3:45:00 PM

Sage, it is sad because it is real life, not fiction, thanks for the excellent ~