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one day one wish one poem

Let us escape our space and time
Let mine go forward and yours unwind
And let us meet on even plain
Just for a day each others claim
Before the dawn we both awake
Aware we only have this date
To you I give what I promised death
From earthly being all I have left
The last act of love given this breath
A gift for your existence and poetrys depth

(An invitation for a collaboration with 
Elizabeth Wesley.)

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  1. Date: 11/5/2013 10:45:00 AM
    Nicely done on this poem. Did not see the other part so will have to look at Lizzie's. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:07:00 AM
    A very romantic and lovely poem my dear friend John. thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping to read again one of my poems. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Will we be together? When will you post my part, they go together well! :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 9:31:00 PM
    Honestly, I thought this was awesome! You guys collaborate really well. Love the clever rhyming and the message. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:30:00 PM
    this is so romantic :D I really enjoyed my read this morning John, wishing you a wonderful day :) - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Wondetful post john

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:07:00 AM
    Wow! How absolutely charming....I was taken in my by it! Thanks for sharing...and thanks for that lovely post on my poem! love a woman is an art that Bryan Adams beautifully portrayed in that song! :) I'm A FAN!