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Jonquil : field of growing beautiful narcissus flowers We are having a beautiful spring day in February..However, winter is probably not over..Sara
One day of spring in February Jonquils send forth their blooms Found warm coat unnecessary Wore warm air draped costumes Sky of sky-blue satin sports dots Of gauzie dotted swiss Great this experience snapshots A day to reminisce When tomorrow's winter's air cold Blows 'pon my northern door One day of spring so very bold I'll remember once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/7/2012 8:15:00 PM
So far it has been a very mild winter in our part of the world, very lovely story poem,nice rhyme. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you, Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/7/2012 3:32:00 PM
when spring has sprung you will be there, summers coming sure, the perfume smell is in the air, nothing's nicer more, nature restrung... thank you Sara Kendrik...
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:22:00 PM
sensational imagery Sara.. filled with fragrance and graceful lines.. good luck if for the Spring contest luv..
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:30:00 PM
How splendid. This poem warmed my heart, remembering the pleasant season of Spring..keep up the outstanding work. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/5/2012 5:50:00 PM
We have had some decent weather in New Jersey the past few days. Your poem describes those days very well.
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:23:00 PM
Winter in February,snow and air cold...NOT a spring yet..... - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:20:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Sara. I enjoyed your One Bold Spring Day poem. I hate winters, so spring is always a welcomed sight. That's why I live where summer is pretty much 6 months of the year. God bless, Maureen
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful, very beautiful write here Sara! I love the descriptions, I could feel myself there! Wonderful poem, Awesome Work!!
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:48:00 PM
Im so looking forward to spring this year Sara and this poem brings it 1 step closer , thank you , Hugs Declan xx
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:44:00 PM
This is a short poem, but Ienjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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