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Once Upon a Time

I hovered, trapped a girl all velvety * firmly attached to threads of fragrant lavender _______________________ September 12, 2012 Poetry/Verse/Septolet/Once Upon A Time Copyright Protected, ID 09-420-154-12 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Septolet sponsor, nette onclaud, Judged 09/26/2012 Sixth Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2012 12:50:00 AM

Constance, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/28/2012 8:14:00 AM

Big congratulations Constance xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/28/2012 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Constance. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/27/2012 5:37:00 PM

I like this first person entry. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2012 5:07:00 PM

awesome one for its beauty and imagery, Constance.Congrats on your win.

Kash Poet

Date: 9/27/2012 1:51:00 PM

A unique approach here by you Constance.Congratulations on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2012 10:22:00 PM

CONGRATS CONSTANCE ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN MY FRIEND .. WE R ALL ENJOYING NEW GRAND BABY BORN FEW DAYS AGO .. HE IS A LITTLE TREASURE LUV ..

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/26/2012 3:06:00 PM

I would have put this higher on the winner's list, Constance! Lovely take on the contest!! Nicely done!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2012 3:19:00 PM

wow, I just love this one, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2012 10:01:00 AM

This is a very awesome write my friend! I haven't checked this contest out so I don't know what is expected, but from what I can tell, this should do well in the contest on its own! This is a beautiful poem Constance, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! Great Work!!