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On Velvet- Naani Repost

On push velvet of the midnight sky The stars dance Scintillating in sensuality Like your eyes Ebullient, I ride The shooting star of your love Combusting into flames That rock my universe Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/26/2014 4:19:00 PM

wow, this is so impressive, your poetry truly does scintillate.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/26/2014 6:59:00 PM

Scintillate...one of my favorite words, Harry. Thanks ever so much for visiting. I've missed you.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/26/2014 3:23:00 PM

I love the title and your poem's stellar enchanting ride.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/26/2014 6:59:00 PM

Thank you, my darling.

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2014 2:34:00 PM

This is a fine write my friend.. I think it will place very high in the contest.... Bravo!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/26/2014 7:00:00 PM

Hi, Robert. It has placed....but I was going through turmoil at the time and deleted it later. I'm reposting some of my work. Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2014 1:45:00 PM

- Oh ... so beautiful, Eileen !! - ( it rock! :) - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/26/2014 7:01:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine! Coming your way soon.

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/26/2014 1:19:00 PM

Comet tails all the way! I love how you love love. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/26/2014 7:02:00 PM

Thanks, Justin. Thank you for appreciating my work....an expression of my soul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:18:00 PM

this is GORGEOUS!!! Is this an edited version? I hope your original did well in the contest because this one ROCKS!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/26/2014 7:03:00 PM

Andrea....it didn't get top win, but your praise....gives me that satisfaction I need. Thanks