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On the Greying of His Beloved's Hair

My Sweet, my beloved redhaired Wonder, Lady of the brightly burning hair; The tyrant Time we all serve under Has spread the grey of all his ashes there - The dust of all the days we've shared Has fallen through your fiery locks And settled with the ticking of the clocks. With each turning of the night to day Our lives have known their joys and shocks As silver strands have stolen sparks away. But what of that, my Dearest Dear? His Majesty has done as much to me, and more. My love of you grows from year to year Each embrace the better of the one before, Which shall not cease as we approach the final Door. The glow of you burns on in each thing my heart remembers; Those sparks yet blaze alight beneath the embers And I marvel every day that I may call you mine, All through the suns of every June, the snows of all Decembers, Through it all the silver ever rises to a nobler shine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/21/2010 8:59:00 PM
excellent poem, first time read, congrats on featured poem, Harry
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:08:00 PM
CONGRATS ON BEING FEATURED! RHONDA HERO
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:54:00 PM
that was absolutely lovely, congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week William. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:34:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round William. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 9/4/2009 7:52:00 AM
I am so happy to be reading your excellent poetry today Bill. I thank you for sharing it here at the Soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2009 6:02:00 PM
Please check your soup mail, William ! :)
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Date: 9/3/2009 5:34:00 PM
This melted my heart....what a poem of love is this! No love can compare to one that has been through the suns of every June, and snows of all Decembers. This was so wonderful....yes wonderful!! ~ Best wishes, Carrie
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