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On the edge of a dream

Sunlight on the sea
A beautiful reflection
Here I stand alone 
Thinking about yesterday
And remembering her love

for Andrea’s On the edge of a Dream tanka contest

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 9:42:00 AM
    Beautiful, sad poem, Jack... congrats on the win (the poem I mean; I hope things are going well...)

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 4:24:00 PM
    Jack, this is a beautiful Tanka! It's never too late to say Congratulations on your so deserving win! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:59:00 AM
    You make it so easy to feel what the poet is feeling. Fantastic write! Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:00:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Jack xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Jack, this is simple but the thought just really moved me. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:21:00 PM
    Congrad's Jack keep them coming. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 3:06:00 PM
    painful memories Jack,, i am so sorry... yet the poetry is beautiful....

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:07:00 AM
    That would make a painful memory. An excellent poem for the contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:51:00 PM
    nice write Jack , thank you for reading my Secret Garden" ;} Have a great New Years ;}

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 12:03:00 PM
    A real beauty Jack. Touches the heart for sure.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 2:35:00 AM
    Beautiful tanka. Touching emotions flow through this poetry of yours. Excellent entry for the contest. Here at soup we are one big family, always there for fellow poets and Time Heals All.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:44:00 PM
    I feel the emotion within..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 4:33:00 PM
    There's beauty here upon this earth when you wonder what it's worth. A glimmer of a sunlit sea reminds us what will be, will be. A rhyme can't fill the empty hole where love filled up your entire soul. But peace and love come from above. And hope will fit just like a glove. Chin up dear Jack! Get back on track and do your best for what you lack. Peace dear poet.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
    wistful and wonderful...

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 2:26:00 PM
    Some memories a so painful.

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Dreams are meant to fade in time. wishing you the best to come this year. You will see*LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:56:00 PM
    Jack, wonderful just wonderful,,Geraldine sends he best, she said keep your chin up....David