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On Feathered Wing

The birds of prey above the sea On feathered wing, they glide and dart Below a sky of red decree The birds of prey above the sea With lifting wings to set them free A line of black turned spacious art The birds of prey above the sea On feathered wing, they glide and dart

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2015 9:52:00 AM

Great write, Frederic! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:32:00 PM

FREDERIC, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:47:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 1:14:00 AM

Frederick, this is lovely. One suggestion. Not every single line needed a period. It makes it feel a bit choppy. Other than that, this was mighty fine!! Congrats in my contest.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/24/2015 11:40:00 PM

Lovely imagery in this triolet, Frederic! Good luck in the contest:)

Skat A

Date: 5/24/2015 4:02:00 PM

Good triolet. SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 5/24/2015 3:24:00 PM

such divine imagery Frederic - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx