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On a Clear Day - Etheree

Snow atop Mount Snowdon On a clear day visibility is unsurmountable, mist can invade in minutes. Causing treacherous conditions. carry extra clothes, maps and whistle. Look and enjoy the vista unfolded. Penned 19 September 2015

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Date: 9/20/2015 4:04:00 AM
Beautifully penned with giving good advice Seren to the climbers :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2015 4:14:00 AM
Having just read the contest rules I think you may be right... save it for another time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/20/2015 4:12:00 AM
was about to take out of contest didnt think was octobery enough hmmm now am not sure

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