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Old Scar, New Pain

. Across the windswept sea swaying, tossing, sunlight strews diamond dust, sparkling, dancing. The din of the onrushing waves behind makes the love song that you summon in your mind sound desolate, garbled and fragmented with the pain of an old scar newly wounded. .

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Date: 3/7/2011 10:18:00 PM
like the beginnig imagery, but then to end with pain, enjoyed reading.
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