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Old Poems

The old poems; I once wrote, I tried to keep them safe.
I wrote of things, that I had lived and I wrote of things
that I had done. I also wrote of things from life. Old poems 
bring us memories. Old poems bring us tears, other times 
they bring us joy.

Old poems - came from the heart, to express love, grief 
or hurt. Old poems, I like to read. They touch my heart "oh "
so deep. I can picture what someone wrote a very, very
long time ago.

Today I will write some new poems, but they will be old
tomorrow. To you reader I want to say - thank you for
reading my old poems today...

0218/2013
Written By Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/21/2013 12:25:00 AM

I like the sentimentality of reading old work. It's not as polished or refined, but it's a part of YOU that got left behind... you can tell when someone is fan when they read your older poems. They want to know every aspect of you... new old or in between. It's all pieces of the puzzle to me... very well done!

John Posey

Date: 3/5/2013 2:54:00 PM

I love your ability to fashion words into reading pleasure. I identify with your thought process here.... It urges me to create..... Love ya..... Jake

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/23/2013 3:35:00 PM

Oh I like this Lucy, just what I think when I read my old one's from writing as a teenager ;} Thank you for reading Let me come over " ;} you have a blessed day .

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/20/2013 9:22:00 PM

I am right there with you on this one. :o) And I am looking forward to reading some more old poems of yours this evening.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/20/2013 6:04:00 AM

Lovely nostalgic writing! Old or new poetry is beautiful! Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2013 4:32:00 PM

Poetry comes from the bottom of ..... the heart and soul ..... old or new. - Like all your poems Lucilla, they are easy to understand and written with heart and soul. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2013 10:34:00 PM

Hello Lucy, i want to read all your old poems, and new poems.. he he he.. does not matter, I will meet your new poems tomorrow, and the old ones right as we speak. I love how everyone of your poem, shares real emotions... experience, and good imagery.. your a wonderful friend and poet, xox~ LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2013 10:25:00 PM

this is wonderful. From one writer's soul to the souls of all of us!!

David Fisher

Date: 2/18/2013 6:57:00 PM

I enjoyed the poem, and such an interesting way to think of old poems.

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/18/2013 5:12:00 PM

You are surely welcome for me reading you old poems, I enjoyed reading this a lot my friend! This one is a special poem, crafted with great poise, awesome piece, Great Work!!