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Oh my first love, how i love thee

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Oh my first love, how i love thee

Oh my first love!!

How i love thee
My heart cannot forget
Time cannot supress the memmories
I remember you as if it was yesterday

Oh that sweet smile
That melts my heart away
That tender look, that looks deep into my soul
and reaches into me and makes me feel safe

Oh my first love; I yearn for you
The friendship that we shared, the laughter
The easy with which we communicate
No amount of years of absence erase

Oh my first love
Ours was a love deeper than feelings
It was a friendship stronger than most trials
It was a bond of two souls
Oh my first love
How I love thee!!

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Hluani, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV PD""

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Welcome to poetry soup! Light & Love