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''Oh My Darling, Darling''

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I slipped on a teardrop and landed, on your grave- amongst flowers planted. Oh my darling, darling . . . My weeping tears could fill a blue ocean, and when you left me- my heart was broken. Oh my darling, darling . . . I slipped on a teardrop and landed, on your grave- and now I feel stranded. Oh my darling, darling . . . Since you left me this life has been frozen, I always ask God- why you were chosen. Oh my darling, darling . . . I slipped on a teardrop and landed, on your grave- you left me abandoned. Oh my darling, darling . . . Do you hear my sad words of love spoken, I am weary dear- of this death devotion. Oh my darling, darling . . . _______________________________ June 19, 2016 Poetry/Verse/"oh my darling, darling" Copyright Protected, ID 16-802-589-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 6/25/2016 9:02:00 PM
I have been away and now I find myself in your garden of dreams once more, and it is good to be here. Must pay my dues and begin to write again!
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Date: 6/20/2016 5:22:00 PM
What a wonderful expression of the love we feel for those whom we have lost to death. Great write, BW!
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Date: 6/20/2016 9:06:00 AM
A wonderful idea for this contest BW. Cindi has given us a great line to work with. Beautiful write.
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Date: 6/20/2016 4:21:00 AM
A beautifully sad write:) Splendid:)
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:46:00 PM
Sad and beautiful. Great write.
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:30:00 PM
wow, Constance. did you ever come up with a good idea to do this challenge. You are a marvel. And such a sad poem!!
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Date: 6/19/2016 4:50:00 PM
I unfortunately have felt that sadness. This is beautifully written! Good luck with the contest! :)
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