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Oh, the Hurt

As I walk the long path I weep, for all that I have lost to death; still- I have memories to keep. The breeze is a silent sweet breath. It hurts so bad, it makes me sad. Why do I come? I come for them, those dead souls who wait for me here. Here, in this peaceful place of tears, where birds sing all the day in trees; oh- I will come for all my years. yet, if I could make time freeze. It hurts so bad, it makes me sad. Why do I come? I come for them, to lay red roses on their tombs . . . . . ____________________________ June 17, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Oh, the hurt Copyright Protected, ID 17-8020-79-17 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France For the Standard contest, If it hurts so bad, why do we do it? Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 06/2016 Third Place

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Date: 7/15/2016 2:54:00 AM
Vivid and thought-provoking write, BW. Here you have captured that ineffable bittersweet feeling belonging only to those places of eternal rest. FAV'd!
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Date: 6/25/2016 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful form and story - always enjoy your words. Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Jesse
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Date: 6/23/2016 7:27:00 AM
Congrats Broken Wings. It grew tears. Such an incredible choice. blessings to you my friend. Curtis.
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Date: 6/18/2016 4:04:00 AM
I love this sad, yet true verse:)
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Date: 6/17/2016 5:00:00 PM
Beautifully sad. I love the first four lines. They pulled me in.
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