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Oh, Dream Sweet Dreams

The touch of cold enters my life, the hands of time move faster than the speed of light; the spinning of the world takes on a new meaning as I lie awake in the pitch blackness of the night. What was, will never be again, what is to come, still a mystery; the night pours out of me in thick droplets of sweat, covering my shivering body in a glistening hue of black. All around is the silence, except for the pounding of my bursting heart; what was real is now gone, vanished into the darkness... into the deep, dark crevices of my mind. The images now distorted whirl by for the remainder of the pitch blackness of the night; surreal is the only word to describe this trembling, awful night of terror. "Dream sweet dreams" we tell our children, but the night can bring horror instead of joy; "Dream sweet dreams" we tell ourselves, but we know better than the lie we verse... much better than the night we curse. For "Dream Land" contest sponsored by Olajide Adelana.

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Date: 2/23/2011 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win George. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your grand win in the Contest, George! Always a joy to read! Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:26:00 PM
Hi George - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:34:00 AM
This poem has so much truth....the night can often manifest the darkest thoughts, the blackest worries, that only daylight can shoo away. Well done! Congratulations, George!
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:17:00 PM
Congrats George on your super success in Debbie's contest with this amazing entry .. enjoy a top spot for a top notch poem luv..
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:12:00 PM
Good wording and rhyming in this presentation, George. My entry "My Friend's Woman" is fictional. You did render great advice which I agree with totally.
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Date: 2/8/2011 11:36:00 AM
George, some people do have "sweet dreams" most of the time, but like you I dread falling asleep. Have had nightmares since childhood and actually take medication to try and prevent them. The way you describe sweating and shivering in the darkness as your heart pounds is exactly the way it feels. Maybe if we could find more joy in life it wouldn't be this way, but I know I was a happy kid so the remedy eludes me. Brilliant poem for my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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