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Of Sobbing Flames

Love's last light throws ember shadows sighing coals cast waning arrows of sobbing flame on lukewarm ground; twilight spits into the fire, but cannot slake my starved desire, bereaved heart cloaked in misery's gown. How dare Cupid so fickle turn exchanging smiles for face now stern stealing my regal red rose crown. ©Faye Lanham Gibson, June 12, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/13/2014 1:57:00 AM
Wow,thus is amazing.
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Date: 8/13/2014 1:57:00 AM
This
Date: 6/22/2014 1:10:00 PM
Big congrats on your fine win!!!! bravoooooo
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Date: 6/21/2014 6:35:00 PM
Love your imagery in here. One of the best on the list!! Congrats, Faye.
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Date: 6/20/2014 3:32:00 PM
the feeling of loss grabbed me, faye.. superbly constructed!.. cheers for the fine win in my challenge.. huggs
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Date: 6/20/2014 3:18:00 PM
beautiful imagery tinged with sadness. a well deserved winner. hugs jan x
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Date: 6/20/2014 2:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Faye, though shrouded in a sad atmosphere. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 6/20/2014 12:21:00 PM
Faye, a nice poem and congrats for the win. Mohan
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Date: 6/13/2014 10:13:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of lost love, good luck, Faye
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