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Of Men, and Shadows

Pen to page in a flurry of swirling magic, the words flow like a stream as all folds out before you like a dream scape. First a drop falling upon nothing that begins a grand cascade as the world itself expands beneath it. Grand oceans expand over the endless expanse, crashing against great landmasses rich with life and beauty. An eruption of flora, filled with fauna that dart and dash about with glee. The pen stops and as the one holding it opens eyes alight with creative vision all is not as it seems....All is not well. All about the creator shadows fall and fly crashing and creating things of their own and even as they creep closer the brilliant white light of creation begins to flicker and become red. All around the creator the world changes becoming dark and damaged as the creatures of shadow writhe and close the gap. Then a claw grasps onto the creator as they pull themselves from the shadows showing themselves for only a moment. As quickly as they came they were gone in a flurry of shadow, all that remains is a chair white and strong and a bottle next to a page that now lies blank once more.....The shadows abated...for the moment

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/2/2015 12:03:00 AM
Zach, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2015 3:19:00 PM
:)
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Date: 4/28/2015 3:19:00 PM
Zach, this is a great Honorable Mention poem. LINDA
Date: 4/26/2015 3:05:00 PM
Zach, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2015 11:59:00 AM
the beauty of your words tickle lots of fancy in me. Great write on a lovely page.
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:33:00 PM
ZACH, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Zach Kelley
Date: 4/17/2015 2:42:00 AM
Thankies so much!
Date: 4/10/2015 8:36:00 PM
Zach, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Zach Kelley
Date: 4/17/2015 2:42:00 AM
thankies!

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