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Of Her, River

At first my feet would not allow Myself to feel her dashing charm But once inside of her somehow I came to joy with no alarm She always let's me take a swim And sail upon her salted streams At night when light is dark and grim Her beauty blossoms mid-night dreams She's clear and cute and calm and cool I'll love her to the very end My Pa wants me to buy a pool Maybe I'm just a rivers friend 7-2-11

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Date: 7/10/2011 4:32:00 PM
EXCELLENT metaphor for a "her" I love the twist! GREAT writing, Johnny. (and I adore water, but of the ocean variety!)
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:43:00 PM
great work!! I like the descriptions....
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