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Of Air, Fire, Water and Earth

A new beginning.........clarity the mind of intellect, reason......... a fresh breath of prosperity spring morning births a new season A transformation time arrives from the south spark of life emerge energy and passion alive strength and purpose together, merge Abound, a healing love of blue a twilight of autumn reveal intuition, wisdom anew a blissful image pure, surreal........ Silence arrives upon midnight death brings a new cycle, life, breath winters endless vale reflect light captured in completion......sabbath Of air, fire, water and Earth each element entwining a season of birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/23/2010 7:54:00 AM
Rick, nice read....I like the way you tie a discription to a word.
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:15:00 PM
this is a beautiful write. filled with wonder too.(: a love that heals. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/11/2010 6:35:00 PM
came back to this one. I really like it! This is the one I want to try next. I will have to really think about the elegy one (Like who to do it for!!) It was so weird, I went there and scrolled right past it! So I thought the contest was closed. I just worked on HOly Mole-y. MOre like Holy cow. What a silly poem! Luv, andrea
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:17:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 11:23:00 PM
wow, you blew it out of the water, Rick! Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:35:00 PM
A captivating piece Rick and good luck in the new contest by BG.. I wrote one earlier entitled "Elements in Ecstasy".. enjoy..with luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:15:00 PM
Certainly a compelling write, Rick! The transformation of the seasons and the elements is a unique approach. Wish I had thought of this myself. You'll score high in the contest with this one, dear! Love, Carolyn
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