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Ode To Yoda

Hindsight, as a gift good it would be Ours if only to have it we could Misery, to stop it for you and me People not to meet, good be that would. Hearts broken, not they would be Heartbreak, not happen it would Love true, we would see Hindsight, as a gift, be good it would Corners to turn, not turn them we would In hindsight, save us it would, we see Troubles save us, many it would Life with hindsight, good it should be Challenges though, would few be Need them we do to grow In hindsight, them we cannot see Learn we must from our woe. Forgiveness, a reason for this there is Mistakes many to ourselves we lay bare In hindsight also trouble there is Need it when we do, it’s never there. © 13/03/2013 ~GG~ Contest entry

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Date: 3/27/2013 4:40:00 PM
A good message in your poem Mandy, i like the winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
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Date: 3/23/2013 6:21:00 AM
great write and win Mandy...congrats
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Date: 3/22/2013 5:48:00 PM
number one you are, congrats on a deserved winner...
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Date: 3/22/2013 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations and on your wonderful win
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Date: 3/22/2013 4:25:00 PM
MANDY, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD
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Date: 3/22/2013 12:26:00 PM
Great poem Mandy. Congratulation! Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/22/2013 10:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win, nice job! Jen
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Date: 3/22/2013 9:19:00 AM
The last line sums it up perfectly!!
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:31:00 AM
Mandy, you have shown how to write yoda....Seren
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:22:00 AM
Mandy...Awesome. Congrats!
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Date: 3/22/2013 5:55:00 AM
This is a great take on Yoda-speak. Congrats on the win!
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Date: 3/22/2013 5:43:00 AM
Like Yoda you think. Like Yoda you write. On your top placement congratulations we give!"
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Date: 3/19/2013 9:19:00 PM
Mandy, you rocked this. Not only did you catch the essence of his speech pattern, but of his thought pattern. First place, see this, do I! LOL... :)
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Date: 3/14/2013 11:54:00 PM
hey, this sounds just like Yoda. REally nice one, Mandy!!! (sorry if I have missed any of your blogs lately. I have been really busy at work and Joe is always home now trying to find work. It's really hard making time for Soup these days and I miss when I would be here for hours sometimes!!)
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Date: 3/14/2013 9:12:00 AM
nicely penned Mandy...best wishes
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Date: 3/13/2013 3:14:00 PM
Nicely done Mandy for Ode to Yoda and including a lesson to learn. I think it will definitely place as a win. Tricky writing I thought, but I enjoyed writing one too. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/13/2013 1:23:00 PM
Mandy I like the poem but who is Yoda?...David
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Date: 3/13/2013 10:47:00 AM
To be shared, a very clever poem, to be read you have written... Terry
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