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October Sunlight, In the Evening

sky like a blue dome cups the gold-orange peel that inks shredded colors as it slides beneath toothed edges of green pines and lavender hills and steals lingering shadows- black figures slipping through light and disappearing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/6/2012 7:22:00 AM
A great write and very enjoyable read Jennifer. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2012 3:09:00 PM
You describe a beautiful picture in your poem Jennifer. - Well done! Have a nice new week - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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