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Ocean Waves

ocean waves swelling
gray water touches gray sky
water spouts come_go  

Sponsor: Heather Ober
Contest:Ocean-ku
Written this Thirteenth day of April 2013

naturehaiku

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/21/2013 7:47:00 PM

Very pretty well expressed enjoy it really, I love the ocean and sea. thanks for sharing it with me. also thanks for your comments. cheri

Jack Horne

Date: 4/21/2013 4:56:00 PM

lovely haiku, my friend

Judy Konos

Date: 4/15/2013 3:23:00 PM

You go Sara! That's a winner!

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/14/2013 12:46:00 PM

Beautifully done!!! I love water spouts. Especially when I'm not near one. :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/14/2013 9:49:00 AM

Sara; This is Amazing, the way you made the swelling waves touch the gray sky. you know sometime ago I wrote a poem ( Ocean Waves ), but mine is longer and very different. I'll see if I can find it. Good luck in the contest....... Lucilla

Donna Jones

Date: 4/13/2013 10:25:00 PM

Beautiful Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/13/2013 1:58:00 PM

This presents a nice image, I really enjoyed reading this amazing write this afternoon! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/13/2013 1:57:00 PM

It is like plunging into the ocean! Wonderful!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/13/2013 1:17:00 PM

Sara... This is lovely... Right there My friend... Good luck~A.O

Jack Horne

Date: 4/13/2013 1:01:00 PM

lovely haiku, Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 12:11:00 PM

Sara, everywhere I go here I see ocean-ku's...LOL..i love them all. good luck in the contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA