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Golden moon in bloom Gilded beams dance on water Gleaming tide rising. Rolling waves of cobalt cascade ashore, subservient to time and nothing more. And the boom of crashing breakers punctuate the deafening silence. Cerulean curls color the reef, in gradient shades of ebony. For the night steals last light like a thief acting purely out of jealousy, darkness, its eternal destiny. (Verse)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/7/2015 8:59:00 PM
Stunning imagery and eloquent descriptive language, Emile! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/8/2015 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 11/7/2015 3:11:00 PM
wow, Emile, Congratulations on your Poet's Dozen win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 11/7/2015 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Emile, a 7! Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/8/2015 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 11/6/2015 7:48:00 PM
FANTASTIC VERSES MY FRIEND.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 2:20:00 PM
Amazing :) SKAT
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:16:00 AM
Hello Emile... your writing is always interesting and enjoyable to read - thank you once again Emile - Lindsay
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay, may I return the compliment, I find your work interesting and enjoyable to read as well, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:03:00 AM
Emile, I love the splendid imagery, the alliterations, and wow the line with the boom.... very clever to use the word punctuate!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Olive, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Date: 11/2/2015 9:04:00 PM
Making sure I rated!
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Date: 11/2/2015 9:02:00 PM
Your poem is par excellence, Emile! Outstanding imagery and words! Big 7 and you should do well in the contest :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/3/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 11/2/2015 1:51:00 PM
absolutely stunning Emile - each poem is a delight to read:-) hugs jan xx7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/2/2015 2:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I bask in the glow of your praise. Emile.

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