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Ocean-Ku Haiku

cold Pacific night two moons on mirror water wave-whisper song For Ocean-ku contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:02:00 PM

Jack, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/24/2013 8:23:00 PM

Thank you... And the same to you - congrats! Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:04:00 PM

Jack....this is gorgeous congratulations

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/23/2013 3:33:00 PM

Thank you for the nice compliment... Jack

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 10:19:00 AM

Lovely imagery and transmitted feeling! Don't worry overly about the 5/7/5 factual. Most of the haiku is meant to be in the readers mind between the lines ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/23/2013 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for the comment and advice... Jack

Jack Jordan

Date: 4/23/2013 9:19:00 AM

Thanks, Caleb! And the same to you... Jack

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/23/2013 9:12:00 AM

Cool Jack! Congrats on the win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2013 11:28:00 PM

this is just beautiful!!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/13/2013 10:11:00 PM

I am very impressed Jack....nice....

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/13/2013 10:32:00 PM

Thanks! It was a wonderful experience. It's interesting to capture the moment 20+ years after the event... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 12:01:00 PM

I need a jacket all of a sudden... a nice xool breeze... love the passion from the ocean. Jack, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/13/2013 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Linda. Enjoy your weekend... Jack

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 4/13/2013 10:33:00 AM

Beautiful! i love this write!

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/13/2013 10:56:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate he comment... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2013 9:43:00 AM

Nature's mirror ... Lovely Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/13/2013 10:24:00 AM

Thanks! I hope you're having a fine weekend... Jack