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deep blue mysteries swell in waves of harmony a whirlwind romance 12/4/13

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Date: 4/28/2013 5:41:00 PM
Tahera, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:57:00 AM
A beautiful write. Congrats on your win. love phyl
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Date: 4/26/2013 9:47:00 PM
Very strong powerful piece. Its very beautiful.
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Date: 4/24/2013 8:03:00 PM
Tahera, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/24/2013 9:03:00 AM
Lovely piece,Tahera...Great write..Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:38:00 AM
many congratulations Tahera love xx
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:12:00 AM
Tahera this is really lovely. Congratulations. Mystery, harmony and romance. Beautiful.
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:12:00 PM
Beautiful congratulations
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Date: 4/23/2013 8:41:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 4/22/2013 11:43:00 PM
Your take on it is quite creative and lovely, dear:) Jag
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Date: 4/17/2013 2:27:00 PM
Great work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading it..It is so very creative..Thanks for stopping by to let me know that I placed in a contest..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2013 11:33:00 AM
Love your weaving of nature and emotion.
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Date: 4/17/2013 3:25:00 AM
A great ocean haiku showing a very lovely image! So much love it! Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend Tahera. Thank you so much also for your congratulatory comments! Good luck and wish you all the best! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:43:00 AM
you always blow me away.. great shift on the third line... amazing, tahera... will try to spill one...:) huggs!
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Date: 4/12/2013 7:52:00 PM
oh, I do love this one. I was going to use the word swell in mine too, but I went a different way! (it's not posted yet, however.)
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Date: 4/12/2013 11:24:00 AM
lovely ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/12/2013 6:27:00 AM
Nice take, linking it with romance, Tahera:) Jag
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Date: 4/12/2013 6:27:00 AM
For Heather's contest, I reckon. It should do very well. Its a good one!
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:18:00 AM
- As romantic music ... love it, well done Tahera. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2013 1:56:00 AM
I love the movement of your poem, Tahera, and the way your relate it to the creation of human emotions. Cheers, David
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