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Obscure Bloom, the Eclipse

Obscure Bloom; the Eclipse Obscuring the moon A veil of rose and ashes Fades and overwhelms Memory of light Lost imprint of blossom bloom Imperceptible Through black spaces move Things unearthly and unseen Stirring the shadows Earth falls to silence Darkness comprehending not What may yet become by Gail

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Skat A

Date: 9/28/2015 9:27:00 PM

Gail, enjoyed this very much... SKAT

Gail Foster
Date: 9/29/2015 4:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I watched the eclipse on my own in the dark down the canal in my town. It was a profound experience and something really did move in the bushes. It's a privilege being able to find and share words that can convey some sense of the atmosphere of such things. All the very best to you.