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Objects In the Mirror - Reflections of a Florette

like the objects in the mirror did you only appear nearer now broken and seven years cursed i feel foolish my heart coerced and still nothing about us is any clearer MAURICE YVONNE SEPTEMBER 4 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2015 6:29:00 PM

Love your comment to me that you left on my reply here a few months back! thanks for seeing my poems today. You are a wonderful friend forever! sorry I am rushing today. Too much poetry to catch up on but I am doing my best and just wanted to tell you hello for today.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/5/2014 11:00:00 PM

This is a great poem for the contest. I wish you all the best and appreciate all your kind words and gestures. God bless you and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/5/2014 11:14:00 PM

thank you. God bless you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:59:00 AM

Hello Maurice, I was not much on line, yesterday... However, I had this poem on hold... LOL... On my browser, ready to read today. :) By the way, WOW, you might not be looking in to the right mirror. Look closer and you will see, for I believe a mirror, reveals all. I know this is deep, however it holds a lost feeling, I can relate too... Love Linda, your newest fan. ((by the way you are my newest favorite poet, as of yesterday. :))

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/5/2014 12:28:00 PM

Where have you been hiding all my life. Never mind if you told me you would have to find a new spot.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/5/2014 10:30:00 AM

Nice take on a mirror Maurice. Good luck.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/5/2014 12:31:00 PM

thank you Brenda.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 1:58:00 AM

Ah ha that's awesome Maurice! Great work! Gl in contest!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/5/2014 3:32:00 PM

thank you Dr. for your very kind words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2014 8:18:00 PM

this is another really good one. Well thought out! I love its message.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/5/2014 12:37:00 PM

oh how you make me blush.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/4/2014 2:57:00 PM

Ow that glass mirrir..not any clearer..Ow to keep believing in a reflection of warmth and embrace.Sometimes We just need to change the mirror ,and new images might remove the curse.I love the way your mind and heart entwined to perform such a powerful write.Adding it tfs.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 3:04:00 PM

i can't thank you enough for your kindness and support. lots of love.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/4/2014 2:58:00 PM

Mirror..Oops typo

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/4/2014 1:30:00 PM

Hey Tim, Jan, hello. I didn't know you two were in here playing. Had I known you were coming I would of baked a cake. Also you both get that thought out of my mind...I mean get that thought out of your mind I spelled it"coming" not what you both thought when you read it.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 3:53:00 PM

I'll make the cake , ginger, lemon, orange and cranberry or courgette or my choc almond brownies mmmmm:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 9/4/2014 1:43:00 PM

I could go for some cake...maybe some pie would work too

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 1:39:00 PM

BEHAVE!LOL :-)hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2014 12:01:00 PM

very deep Maurice. good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 1:31:00 PM

Jan read above you.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 1:20:00 PM

*** blushes*** thank Tim you are wonderful my friend:-) hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 9/4/2014 1:13:00 PM

No curses for you Jan.,.you are diamond shining amongst the coal...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 12:33:00 PM

Thank you.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/4/2014 11:43:00 AM

Very deep and so true my friend....I have 3 years to go on my curse.....Tim....if you get a chance check out the collaboration of mine with Cas under CT Duet....love never sleeps

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 1:32:00 PM

Tim stop making Jan blush. What am I going to do with you two kids.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2014 12:35:00 PM

No hope for me then Tim I look in the mirror and am cursed LOL:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 11:49:00 AM

for sure i will Tim.