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O' Mirror, O' Mirror

Who put crows’ feet around my eyes? Who put grey in my hair to dye? I know you’re not prejudicial You show images as real O’ Mirror! It is my father’s face I imply +++ August 3, 2014 Form : Florette Dr. Ram mehta : Fifth Place Win Contest: Reflections of a Florette by nette onclaud

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/16/2014 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations, Dr. Ram, a thoughtful, funny piece with a happy ending remembering one's dad.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 9/15/2014 5:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Dr. Ram!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2014 1:28:00 AM

samshing last line , dr. ram... fascinated!.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and hugggs!

Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/15/2014 1:28:00 AM

~ smashing

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/14/2014 5:04:00 PM

My friends tell me that the older I get, the more I look like my mother did. this is a clever poem. congrats. BG

John Posey

Date: 9/14/2014 2:19:00 PM

This is a pleasant read.... it reminds me of "Reflection"... One I wrote some time ago... Nice work Doctor.... Regards ... Jake

Paul Callus

Date: 9/14/2014 4:13:00 AM

Lovely and witty Dr!! It is true that all of a sudden the resemblance to parents seems to become so very conspicuous. Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2014 12:55:00 AM

Wonderful write Dr Ram n so is ur win! How true! Big congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/13/2014 7:30:00 PM

I remember looking in the mirror the first time I seen my mother. I was shocked. Now it's just everyday life. Loved how your poem brought out the memory. Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2014 6:30:00 PM

ooh I love greying Men Dr Mehta LOL lovely write many congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2014 2:26:00 PM

thank you, dr.ram.. we need 8 syls for line 1.. kindly edit fast.. thanks and huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/13/2014 10:40:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation of my poem and the alert. nette

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/4/2014 1:21:00 PM

Nice poem my friend enjoyed from you. Philosophical touch is there too, I feel. Good luck in the contest. Loved always.bl

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/3/2014 3:02:00 PM

Them mirrors do not lie, but with your age and grays comes wisdom and experience that is pride to wear well. Best of luck in the contest honey. :)

John Posey

Date: 9/3/2014 1:39:00 PM

Cleverly creative..... It reminds me of a contest winner I had some years ago.... You might like "Reflection"..... Jake

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/3/2014 11:00:00 AM

Dear Dr. Ram, At least you're seeing your father. I'm seeing my grandmother. Your poem gave me chuckles. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/3/2014 8:22:00 AM

Lovely, Dr Ram. Yes, at times I feel like having the same talk with my mirror. They grey is starting to show in my hair...just a little, but I've decided to leave it in...salt and pepper is nice. Blessings and good luck on the contest.