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O.B.E.D.I.E.N.C.E.

OBEY THY FATHER'S LAWS BE KIND TO THY BRETHREN EXECUTE PRIDE DREAMS SHOULD BE FULLFILLED INSERT JOY INTO YOUR LIFE EXERT CHARITY UNTO OTHERS NEVER GIVE IN TO LUCIFER COVENANT WITH GOD ENDURE TO THE END

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Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2009 3:42:00 PM

This is good advice to each one of us! Wonderful acrostic lesson here, Savannah! Nicely done! ~ Love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2009 3:31:00 PM

As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Savannah. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol