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O.B.E.D.I.E.N.C.E.

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O.B.E.D.I.E.N.C.E.

OBEY THY FATHER'S LAWS
BE KIND TO THY BRETHREN
EXECUTE PRIDE
DREAMS SHOULD BE FULLFILLED
INSERT JOY INTO YOUR LIFE
EXERT CHARITY UNTO OTHERS
NEVER GIVE IN TO LUCIFER
COVENANT WITH GOD
ENDURE TO THE END

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  1. Date: 12/14/2009 3:42:00 PM
    This is good advice to each one of us! Wonderful acrostic lesson here, Savannah! Nicely done! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 12/14/2009 3:31:00 PM
    As I am sitting here reading your wonderful poetry today, I would like to thank you Savannah. First I would like to thank you for writing and sharing your poetry (whether one poem or a thousand) here at PoetrySoup.Second I would like to thank you for all your kind comments to me and to all the other excellent poets also. I wish you all the best in life and in your writing endeavors in 2010. Love and blessings to all, Carol