O, My Broken Heart Bleeds

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Father does not see my sad, mournful tears that fall on his eternal mossy stone- ______________________________ October 11, 2016 For the contest, Sad One Liner :( sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 11:43:00 AM

oh Broken Wings, terribly sad lady...congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 11:18:00 AM

So sad Constance. congratulations on your honors...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/11/2016 5:14:00 PM

So much sadness in one beautiful line. I am sorry for your loss.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/11/2016 3:54:00 PM

Hi BW, You expressed so much sadness in this one line. This write pulled at the heart strings. It caused me to think about my own dear father. It's most definitely top spot material. I wish you the of luck in the contest-7

Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2016 2:35:00 PM

I'm sure he can feel your love Constance.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2016 1:56:00 PM

Sadness sadly effective. Oh my heart, some days, like when there are a slew of sad writes, I regret being so empathetic. Good luck in all things. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Chris Green

Date: 10/11/2016 1:46:00 PM

This one line expressed such deep sadness. Very nicely crafted.