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Np--Noise of Pain

NP- NOISE OF PAIN
curse and scream from your lungs slap me with words like I am a rag throw the venom while kids hear the pangs kicking my heart sucked in torn paper bag this is the noise of agony stabbed I’m no longer a victim under your spell that sweet voice I had once loved drives me to walk out from your sharp shell (c) Susan Burch's Contest: Offensive Odors/ Noise Polllution

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Date: 1/5/2012 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 2:44:00 AM
Nette congratulations on your win.Loved it first time around,
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:13:00 PM
good, nette. walk out from it!! I think you are the only one who discussed this kind of noise, the worst kind of all! Hope you did well in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/31/2011 10:28:00 PM
Nette,wish you a very very Happy New Year....kashi
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Date: 12/30/2011 3:26:00 AM
The agony of your mind expressed very effectively and emotionally here.This is sure worse than the noise pollution caused by high decibel sounds as it hurts one mind.
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:57:00 PM
Wow, amazing write Nette! It's true how much pain you can get from noise, from objects and from hate in the form of words! Wonderfully written! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:48:00 PM
WoW! you got the emotion boiling here Nette... quite disturbing in a good way. Wishing you a Great Happy New Year dear poet.
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