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'nowhere Slowly'

all you hear is the clock ticking and you can't feel your heart beating time is in a rush to go nowhere slowly you wonder if you are allowed to go with on that rush to nowhere - afraid you might be left behind
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/21/2012 10:14:00 PM
Beautiful expression.
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Date: 5/17/2012 6:33:00 PM
Your words are sounds and feelings from a beautiful heart Luv all day to you!! Michael
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Date: 5/15/2012 11:12:00 AM
i just love this thoughtful write, Wilma. lfde
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:27:00 AM
every minute counts, wilms.. you held me all the way... beautiful!.:) huggs!
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Date: 5/13/2012 4:28:00 PM
Wilma, this is so profound. Last night I could hear the clock ticking below my father's portrait and I wished it was his heart still beating. Time almost seems to stand still when you don't know where to go and are afraid of being left behind. This goes to my faves. Great job, Wilma! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2012 12:54:00 PM
Time rushes and sometimes we feel rush to nowhere or that things may get left undone. Thanks for your comments. Have a great day Wilma. nice to hear from you. love phyl
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Date: 5/13/2012 12:46:00 PM
Wilma, it is slick and deep, love it..David
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:42:00 AM
wow, so deep. BREATHE deeply!!
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:25:00 AM
a time warp of sorts... I enjoyed your poem Wilma...always..Joseph
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