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Now the Dawn Is Breakin'

Emotionally you left long long ago "Already I'm so lonesome, I could die" Why not just leave so you're wild oats can sow I'll wait 'til a good time to say goodbye "Now the dawn is breakin', its early morn" And to the porch drawn to contemplate life There in His tender embrace be reborn He'll let me understand my role as wife And hold me like He'll never let me go Spirit filled, cup running over, renewed Ready my life to give a golden glow From all those years of love that has accrued "Now the dawn is breakin', its early morn" Realization_no need to be lovelorn Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Contest: Songs to Poetry Song: "Leaving On A Jet Plane" We all feel like leaving from time to time or have to leave from time to time..Sometimes in a marriage our mate checks out but they are still there.. Not about me just some thoughts..

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Date: 10/13/2013 9:28:00 PM
love it......SKAT
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Date: 10/11/2013 12:19:00 PM
Sara, congrats on your placement in the Songs to Poetry contest! I enjoyed reading your tender and poignant poem today. Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:46:00 PM
Sara, , Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA
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Date: 10/8/2013 10:41:00 AM
This could easily be put to music !! What a great, yet sad, song!
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:16:00 PM
love the way you tied some of the song's words into yours and made them come to life...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 7:37:00 PM
Very creative way of accepting the challenge! Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love
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Date: 9/25/2013 9:43:00 AM
Wonderful and touching sonnet!
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Date: 9/23/2013 5:09:00 AM
Impressive work Sara. Loved it! Wishing you a wonderful day ahead.
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:35:00 AM
Tenderly romantic, marvelously developed and expressed! Loved it! Good luck, Sara!
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Date: 9/21/2013 12:20:00 AM
wow, what a great way to be inspired by her contest. I think she will like this one! It's quite unique, sara.
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:15:00 PM
This write is filled with such brilliance my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and lovely poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, you have written a masterful poem, Great Work!!
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