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under streetlights haloing amid the black trees, your shadow follows close to me on the familiar sidewalk where we talk of a million nothings at home in the dark I lie awake, again, whispering to you my every thought while the moon is caught in the hollow space beside me filled with the eager nearness of your listening now all is echo hollow, where we once walked hollow, where we once talked of the nothings and the everythings never afraid never alone I am given the vaporous rush of you, lingering in all that love, there is no love like that which I feel when the night begins, in the dim quiet voice of the hallowed silence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/16/2018 5:21:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. A moody and haunting poem. A FAVE for me. Most deserved congrats to you.
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Date: 6/16/2018 11:53:00 AM
Carrie congratulations on your win in the contest. Hope you have a nice day. Constance
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Date: 6/16/2018 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Carrie. Hugs Eve ~' *
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Date: 6/16/2018 7:50:00 AM
Excellent and I love the ending too. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 5/25/2015 11:43:00 AM
HI! Glad I stopped by for this read! Love the tone of this piece, especially the "all is echo." Love the imagery. Hope you are well, Carrie. Summer is coming and I know your love the season! Cheers, Cyndi
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:48:00 AM
Such a beautiful, emotional poem, Carrie. This is so deserving to be at the very top of the podium. My heartfelt congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/12/2015 5:34:00 PM
I was right as always. THE BEST! Congrats.
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:47:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:34:00 PM
Beautiful lines like "now all is echo" linger on in memory. So deep and beautiful. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:32:00 PM
You manage to capture a sate of being and wrestle it to the paper before is vanishes from your sphere of recognition. Very deep and profound. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/11/2015 5:35:00 PM
How you do that? You NEVER cease to amaze...Congrats dear friend - Your biggest fan: Tim------- PS: Thanks for the Adagio. Gotta admit I never heard it before. I watched and listened three time and it is now on one of my Spotify playlists. Will be sending more to you in return...
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Date: 5/11/2015 1:10:00 PM
So happy to see this poem take top honors Carrie. I loved it. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:34:00 PM
Congrats on the win... a brilliant poem..#7. nad
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Date: 5/10/2015 6:00:00 PM
I'm speechless! This is quite simply BRILLIANT. Congratulations and a fave for me Carrie. :)
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:05:00 AM
congratulations Carrie. SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:57:00 AM
A wonderful win Carrie, wishing you a wonderful Mothers Day.... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/10/2015 8:49:00 AM
Wonderfully done Carrie, congrats on the top placement..a 7
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Date: 5/10/2015 8:18:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:08:00 AM
Wow Carrie, this is brilliant! Your poem makes one search inside seeking that same silence. It is one of the best I have read for the contest. I hope to see it do really well. 7
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:32:00 PM
the same quote is what I meant
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:31:00 PM
oh wow, Carrie, I think I chose the same one and did a similar poem (not posted yet). I really love how you did yours. One of the BEST!
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Date: 5/8/2015 6:26:00 AM
Beautiful!!
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:59:00 AM
So so beautiful Carrie I chose this visual too:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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