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Nothing Like Warmth

The storm blew in with a gale force strength It whirled and swirled winters snow The temperature started to plunge And ice crystals could be seen in the air The cold chilled right down to the bone Shaking the warmth from the very soul Flesh would freeze in minutes if exposed The fingers become so numb and blue You try to find warmth within your breath Only it seems the lungs are protesting too The mouth starts to chatter and lips turn blue At this point you head indoors for warmth As the heat hits your fingers it feels prickly The lungs recover fast and the color returns The storm blew in with a gale force Time to find a bed of warmth. 11/29/12

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Date: 1/30/2013 9:48:00 AM
Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
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Date: 12/1/2012 1:33:00 PM
A warm wool blankets, a fireplace and a hot drink in the cup ... then it's nice to be inside. - A stormy poem that is very well written Phyllis. - Wishing you a warm and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2012 8:39:00 AM
Phyllis, I rarely check out that part of Soup: featured poems. I never felt it was significant because when it featured my stuff, for example,it never showed my best poems. I know some folks enjoyed it. I hope you find it. I will let you know if I come across it, ok? Have an awesome weekend. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:13:00 PM
Such amazing images in this wonderful piece. You have brought the reader right next to you in this poem. Luv n hugs Michael.
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Date: 11/29/2012 6:27:00 PM
Your poem flowed smoothly. A great free verse Phyllis. Sending smiles always, Connie
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:13:00 PM
I can really FEEL this and I know you have felt this to describe it so well. Yep, I grew up in Iowa. ME KNOWS!!! awesome and thanks for reading my latest posts.
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