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Chasing a Fantasy Dream

I miss you like the desert misses distant drops of rain. For from the moment you left, all I ever felt was pain. I'm sorry that I've hurt you, you mean everything to me. But until you walked away, I was just too blind to see. How stupid I must have seemed, chasing a fantasy dream. When all the while; you struggled to stifle a silent scream. Love lured you into my life, yet my lies drove you away. And though you deserve much more, I'm sorry's all I can say. Please, forgive me if you can, I love you with all my heart. And despite my betrayal, I don't want to be apart. (Quatrain) 1/23/2015

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:23:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:39:00 AM
Emile, your poem speaks of great tragedy, of lost love, I too have sorrow over what could have been had I taken a different path, well done and thank you for visiting my poem Deep In My Soul, much appreciated ~~
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:00:00 AM
Sorrow is a universal theme shared by many. Emile.
Date: 1/23/2015 4:31:00 PM
Very heartfelt my friend...hope my arrow strikes once more...C--->A
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thanks I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 1/23/2015 3:33:00 PM
Emile, another good poem from you... sometimes we are too late in seeing the truth and the obvious... #7.. lov, nad!
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Nadiya, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 1/23/2015 3:33:00 PM
Missed the rating;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2015 6:28:00 PM
thanks

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