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Northern Lights - Trochee

Night emotes in sun whipped sheets, weaved from rainbow thread. Blueish greens that shyly wink, blushing pink to red. -09 Apr 2015-

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Date: 5/4/2015 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win for this lovely poem, David. What a beautiful picture you painted! Sandra

Date: 5/3/2015 9:55:00 PM

David, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Date: 5/2/2015 7:59:00 PM

Lovely, enjoyed and congrats .BG

Date: 5/2/2015 11:35:00 AM

Lovely and colourful imagery, David! Deservedly on the winners' list. Congratulations! // paul

Date: 5/2/2015 9:00:00 AM

Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara

Date: 5/2/2015 6:40:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Date: 5/2/2015 3:00:00 AM

Another beautiful entry, congrats David.

Date: 5/2/2015 12:42:00 AM

David:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Date: 5/2/2015 12:41:00 AM

This is a gorgeous poem, David and could easily have been my number one choice. What lovely imagery. Congrats in my contest.

Date: 4/10/2015 2:10:00 AM

David this is divine - amazing imagery I hope Andrea loves it as much as I do - a 7 from me! Hugs Jan xx:-)