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Senryu 1- Wiggle

sardines in a can --- passengers on an airplane no room to wiggle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/18/2011 7:56:00 PM
Boy I can relate to the lack of wiggle room on today's planes. Felt like a sardine :) Nice one Kim
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Date: 12/5/2011 12:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative Senryu..Sara
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Date: 12/5/2011 7:20:00 AM
especially if you're fat! (no offense meant) very clever senryu!
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:20:00 PM
hehe, this is quite a cute way of putting it Kim.. Thanks for the smiles this morning ;) Wilma
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Date: 12/4/2011 4:14:00 PM
Good comparison senryu , Kim. I hate a plane like this!
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