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No Time For Cupid

There’s a clock on my wall in the den – striking ten as I slink down the hall - simply remembering when our passion was valid and truthful and honored and sacred. Now the clock strikes again chiming four – on the floor, a famous cherubim writhes from the lash of my claw. His flush face turns pallid. He’s cringing there duct-taped and naked. See my blood loom like lye in a glass on your table. So swig me and swill me - there’s no warning label to inform you of danger when romance goes awry. Your amorous arrows belie. Once again the clock strikes singing eight – it’s too late as I relive the likes of a cursed crippled fate - without legs to stand on I’ll falter and stumble to then fall. Six a.m.- dawn has cracked. You may leave – please perceive your silk bags are all packed there’s no time to bereave and before you’re begone - take this clock, as your gift, from my wall. My aorta grew cold in a bowl on your table. Now chew me and chomp me and swallow when able. Cupid’s retiring - and his bow’s being sold; his lackluster work I’ve cajoled. Written for and dedicated to my loving Father: John M. Heck 01/18/1935 - 02/14/2003

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/13/2010 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations John, on placing in the “Anything Goes!” contest sponsored by: Deborah Guzzi with this creative poem. So cupid finally gave up! No way! Great poetry here. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:10:00 PM
congrats on your poem john, well deserved
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 5:07:00 AM
Deeply profound! Congratulations on your win, John. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2010 6:37:00 PM
Congrats John on your big win in the Anything Goes contest.. enjoy .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor with two poems and I wish the best to you in the finals John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:09:00 AM
John,Congrats on your two poems winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 12:56:00 PM
This wonderful poem, (and your other one, as well.)..deserve to go to the finish line! Congratulations dear John! As always, you are a supreme writer, and we wish you the best. Happy Holidays! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:20:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 8/3/2009 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations john. Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2009 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest John. Wonderful dedication. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 12:09:00 PM
Perfect poem for this contest. Congratulations on your win! It was beyond deserved!
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Date: 7/31/2009 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Michael's contest John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/30/2009 5:08:00 PM
I remember being stunned with the wonderful writing when I first read this poem. Congratulations, John for this winning piece! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Michael's contest! Truely a wonderful poem! So sad, and cynical..which happens when love dies, great job! ~*~ Trudy~*~
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Date: 3/6/2009 8:44:00 AM
Hello John, what a tribute to your father. I have also some poems as tribute to my father. This one is an amazing piece of art. Ernilando
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Date: 2/18/2009 6:47:00 PM
oh my, I surely do understand how one could feel this way. The imagery, the vivid colors you express through your words is quite remarkable. Yet I am a sissy, though I try to be mature when I read something like this, my heart hurts. With love and blessings of healing through sweet time I pray, Lucinda
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Date: 2/16/2009 2:18:00 PM
What a day to die! A day of love, supposedly. Brilliant poem of warranted pain. Great tribute poem.
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Date: 2/12/2009 10:26:00 AM
John that is to say the least a very breathtaking tribute to your father - I know he must have been a good man just look at the son he had - God Bless you John, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 2:52:00 AM
wonderful piece! a pretty picture painted! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/8/2009 12:18:00 AM
feels like the end of the relationship all right. been there, a lot. smile janetta
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Date: 2/6/2009 7:56:00 PM
what an amazing poem. Such a tribute to your father!
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Date: 2/6/2009 1:25:00 PM
John my friend I like the tribute to your father on Valentines day how sad but so well written with strong emotional images. I am sorry for your loss.Laura :(
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Date: 2/6/2009 1:55:00 AM
Hi John. Sorry to bother you. Please check your Soup mail when you get this message. I need your opinion on something. Thanks. Your poet buddy SS
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Date: 2/6/2009 1:33:00 AM
Hi John. Wow! A tough poem to digest. I noticed in your post script your father passed away on Valentine's Day. I'm so sorry. Thank you for answering my email. I appreciate it. Will be posting a new poem this weekend. I once again thank you for your support and guidance. Your new poet friend SS.
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