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No Lovin, No More

The skunk He's drunk No kiss Or bliss His breath Like death A Kick In prick He falls Holds balls Locked door No more

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/19/2014 1:59:00 PM

It's like a dang Footle Locker up in here! Great way to take this challenge to a whole new level. or how they say in South Carolina, : that thare's a hole 'nother level. Woo-Hoo Bo!"

David Brown

Date: 8/18/2014 2:32:00 PM

Hilarious Richard, would love to read more of the Skunk's (mis)adventures! ...David

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 1:30:00 PM

*LOL* babe you crack me up :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/18/2014 10:43:00 AM

Fantastic ones Richard ! Wonder all poets hv quickly mastered into this form! Hv a blessed day!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/18/2014 10:08:00 AM

RICHARD IS A NAUGHTY BOY....RICHARD IS A NAUGHTY BOY! ;) THESE ARE SUPERB! WOW!!! Better than the poo one! ;)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/18/2014 9:52:00 AM

Yeah, stay away :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2014 9:50:00 AM

Lol....when I get home I'll give it a whirl....you know even thinking about it makes it hurt....

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2014 9:35:00 AM

Richard if they are for the contest you only need to submit max of three Jan xxxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/18/2014 9:32:00 AM

Very hilarious footles, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2014 9:38:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2014 9:31:00 AM

RICHARD! I am shocked - laughing so so so much - Andrea will love these ha ha ha Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 9:45:00 AM

such a shame:-( I can't stop giggling:-) Hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2014 9:37:00 AM

No I haven't entered. I can't conclude story with just three.