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No Four Letter Word...

No simple four letter word can express what I feel Tidal waves orf emotions, it's all surreal When I'm in your arms I get a sense of dejavu I adore the very essence of you No simple four letter word can express my happiness You fill this void in my chest princess Beneath my breast bone your pretty face is in a frame I never feel alone because my heart whispers your name No simple four letter word is good enough To describe your body that was surely sculpted above My desire is fire and I'm too far gone I worship the very ground you walk on This is a continuing yearning without pause, And if I paused, what would be the cause????!!!! *written strictly for Matt Caliri contest "I love you because" I hope I read your rules correctly...enjoyed

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Date: 2/21/2010 6:23:00 AM
this is a very enjoyable write, Jimmy and you are indeed right, "no four letter word" would be able to express what you feel--lucky lady :) also thanks for all your comments on my work :)
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:56:00 AM
good write and i kinda wish you weren't gonna be in the contest cause yours is better than mine =( but it's all in good fun right? good piece of art work here. =)
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:42:00 PM
Great entry Jimmy and good luck in the contest Matt is sponsoring.. u just cannot use the word love or state I love u because... to be eligible... great job .. enjoyed reading.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/2/2010 7:12:00 PM
Awesome, my Jimmy! I wish you very good luck in Matt's "I love You, because" Contest! No simple four letter word is good enough, very cleverly written! Great job as usual!! Love, always, Audrey
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